These pitches stood out to me, because they sound like actual pitches, not just thrown together ideas. Each article pitch seems solid and well thought-out, as well as interesting. The pitches seem unique, rather than just "my internship was at _________, and I did ______________.", and the pitches seem to contain some of the questions that he could use to drive his article, and so he has a good starting point for each of the three pitches.
The pitches on this blog stood out to me, because the writer spent her internship as a teacher, as I did. So, these pitches gave me perspective on what I might want to do in my article, and I saw similarities between my pitches and hers. I think that all three pitches - how she grew during her internship as a teacher, how working with the students affected her, and she first had this experience as a student, and now as a teacher - are all well thought out, and would make a good article.
I think that the pitches on this blog were good, because all of the ideas were creative and stood on their own - there weren't any weak ideas. The pitches were unique, such as her first one, in which she proposed an article through an animal's perspective once they entered a veterinary hospital. The other article pitches, about describing a specific room or tool in detail, would also make good pieces of writing, because they aren't about your average internship experience.
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